CG Writing School - emotion

The piece just passed came about just now as I was sitting on my patio, sipping my black espresso filter, sucking on a smoke wondering if the bin men (US: garbage collection team) will collect this old carpet we threw away at the weekend. I'm not hopeful about that at all. 

What I thought was that it's just good to write something. Like exercise everyday. So i started playing around with an emotional piece. Like my dear friend @Theadora7 has mentioned previously, sometimes my writing throws the reader around "like a rag doll".

It's about building up a stress and then releasing it for a split second, with something that causes the reader more curiosity.

I'm hoping also that the attentive reader experiences several different emotions. Did you? I'd love to know.

It's all about trying something particular with each line - an outcome. I'm also - believe it or not - not taking myself too seriously.

That piece actually took longer to explain than it did to write. I hope that was fun.